Wednesday, 7 October 2009

Edit workshop the package


The feedback I was given from my group

Digital technology-

It had a variety of shots, good use of angles and shot types such as match in action, over shoulder and close ups. Could of been improved by adding point of view shots to make the characters more realistic for the consumers perspective.

Creativilty(Storyline) It was good storyline simple but effeciive could tell it was set to the storyboard. Could of had dialogue between the two characters at the end of the film.

Post production- Could tell that i stuck to the storyboard god use of time and planning. Improve on editing maybe considering to use music for some of the scenes building up the tension and showing the relationship between characters.

Improvements

  • Improve on editing cut some of the longest scenes
  • add music to set the tone of the characters
  • Use more variety of shots and angles
  • Include more dialogue between the characters.

My target for my next project will be to include and improve on my editing techniques .I would also like to be able to use more camera angles and shots without hesitation and use panning and zoom to create a different tone to a scene.

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